Saturday, December 13, 2008


My poem, "If Great Lakes," was read and emulated by 285 public school fifth graders from Chicago. 

Jorge P wrote:

a little later she described our dialogue as cheese. 
She became upset because we had no more cheese. 
Weeks later we had a lot of cheese. 

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4 comments:

  1. Tyler Flynn Dorholt7:50 PM

    Yo Zachary, Here are more posts, these ones from third graders. The poems are written in a thirty minute session, so I leave them unedited, as many amusing mispellings occur.

    All the best, Tyler

    http://www.poetrycenter.org/pcc_blogs?q=node/413

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  2. Alisa H / Jake G4:57 PM

    That is the best. Really the best.
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  3. helene11:50 AM

    Janet L:
    Then I would become an ocean
    I would become an ocean
    That gets its water beep.
    I would become a fish
    But also try for protection.

    So good.

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  4. leadright1:47 AM

    i'm from michigan! this post was wonderful.

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